If we are able to let go and let god then in the end I think we will be the better for it.

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If I told you, that I  thirst ,

would you give me a drink.

And if I couldn’t find the words,

would you give me, time to think.

When I tell you that I’m hurting,

and my heart is feeling broke.

Will you laugh at me, as if my feelings ,

were nothing but a joke. 

Should you ever need me, ill be there ,

because I love you so . 

But hurt my feelings, one more time,

and I will let you go,

You’ll probably never notice ,

if this, is where, it ends.

I hope if you, should meet your maker ,

that you have made amends.

 

 

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  • DA Cournean on May 1, 2009

    very nice David. I really like this!

  • marisolflamenco on May 1, 2009

    Beautiful. I love it!

  • kate smedley on May 2, 2009

    Nicely written David, strong message.

  • Bo Russo on May 2, 2009

    Dave,you’ve hit another over the fence,you are becoming one of my favorites,I’m not ashamed to say that either.Bo

  • wizperwind on May 2, 2009

    beautifuly worded

  • nutuba on May 3, 2009

    This is a great message and so well written! I like it. Nicely done.

  • Luffy12 on May 4, 2009

    ok i’ll pray for them

  • postpunkpixie on May 7, 2009

    Cute poem, David, but I’m sorry the message isn’t for me.

  • DA Cournean on Jul 20, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • lindalulu on Jul 21, 2009

    Very nice.

  • revivor on Jul 21, 2009

    good write, great message

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