A poem I wrote to lift the spirit of a crying girl…

The sky cried today,

Girl you are not alone.

This world is not,

Just a round blue stone.

Its got life on it,

And there is more to life.

Everyone has bad times,

Just take it with a smile.

Take it with grace,

Not a tear on your face.

Even though the toughest thing,

Is to embrace.

Be strong I say,

Like everyone does.

But I mean it,

From the bottom of my heart.

Please take care,

You are important to us.

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  • Ramalingam on Aug 18, 2009

    A very nice way to console a girl.Thanks for sharing

  • Holly J. Harrington on Aug 18, 2009

    Very inspiring. thank you.

  • lindalulu on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • Uma Shankari on Aug 18, 2009

    Lovely poem. Its nice to love and be loved.

  • papaleng on Aug 19, 2009

    beautiful and heartwarming.

  • Nikita K on Aug 26, 2009

    Papaleng speaks truly, it is very heartwarming and I can tell that you must have successfully lifted this girl’s spirits. You speak with inspiration and emotion in your poems Ranveer Singh Battu! Well done…

  • Allison Jae on Aug 26, 2009

    A beautiful inspirational poem.

  • Juancav on Aug 26, 2009

    Tender poem.

  • AngelaDavid on Aug 26, 2009

    Absolute beautiful. Precious. Thank you for sharing.

  • Anne McNew on Aug 27, 2009

    nice poem

  • Dee Gold on Aug 27, 2009

    inspiring

  • C LEBLANC on Aug 27, 2009

    beautiful

  • Rana Sinha on Aug 27, 2009

    Very sincere and lovely poem. Did she see it?

  • Eunice Tan on Aug 27, 2009

    So relieving. Nice consolation.

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 28, 2009

    So heartfelt and touching.

  • xoxo on Sep 1, 2009

    Aww… very nice. Just a lonely person deserves- support.

  • Living4Jesus on Sep 3, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • Jane Jane on Sep 10, 2009

    If I were the girl, I’ll absolutely be relieve.=)

  • Angie0000023 on Sep 27, 2009

    This poem was very good. I enjoyed the way you put it together.
    I am also working with poetry as well, Maybe check it out, give me suggestions? (: thank you.

  • virgospoemlover on Nov 6, 2009

    im pretty sure she felt a whole lot better too :)

  • virgospoemlover on Mar 29, 2010

    I almost forgot about this……lol……….n i do trust you…….iv thought enough :)

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