Another poem I once wrote to myself.

When was the last time you felt excitement, precious girl?

When was the last time you felt glad?

When was the last time you felt enlightenment , precious girl?

To see the reasons why you’re sad.

Tell me precious girl, when was the last time you smiled and jumped high to rejoice, when was the last time child your happiness was not destroyed.

What happened precious girl, why so many tears, who has hurt you in this life, what has caused you fear?

Precious girl when was the last time you had love following that lane, the lane that confuses love for consolement because of so much pain.

Look at you, don’t you see your death approaching very soon? your soul will drift away before the flowers bloom.

You’re sick and it’s deadly but see it’s not the end, you can still find the cure to fight your own defense.

Precious girl take a look aroud and realize what you mean, who has traumatized you more with the suffering you’ve seen.

What has hurt you so much that your happiness has narrowed, who has placed you in darkeness ripping up the shadows.

What has made you so unhappy that you’ll no longer make it through, what has inhaled that unique essence that once beloged to you.

Who has left your body brethless lying on the ground,who has taken from your voice the bright melodious sound.

What’s consuming you like air inhaled to give us life, who has penetrated your atmosphere and is slaying you with knives.

What has changed your point of view of life destrroying all your plans, those that were solid as a rock and now they’re grains of sand.

So what is killing you and has changed your world, what is happening to you, tell me, precious girl.

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  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 23, 2009

    A very heartfelt touching poem.Wonderful originality and creativeness.It truly touched my heart.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 23, 2009

    It’s nice you finally able to reflect for without it, our life remains in a routine oblivion. Keep the idea flowing and move on.

  • Nisa West on Jul 23, 2009

    Words that have the power to heal and encourage us to lift the darkness… Isn’t it amazing? This is a unique way to remind oneself of the Truth. Very nice… Keep writing! Xo

  • Sheila on Jul 24, 2009

    Has to be a man lol…….very good look at the inner self

  • OhSugar on Jul 24, 2009

    What has happened to our joy? Why do we give our power over to another person? Instead of making our lives as content as possible we look for us to bring us joy. A very emotional poem.

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