Life on the edge…

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The merest thought of you
Brings me to the edge
Of Love’s cliff face
The precipice
Of desire.

Here I teeter, and rock,
Thrilling with the desire to leap
Face first
Into the chasm,
To cast doubt to the wind,
To fall into you.

Once, when I was young and brave,
I would have stumbled over the edge
Without ever knowing it was there.

Once, when I was in pain,
Suffering the torments
Of Love despoiled,
I would have spat into the wind
Then wondered why my face was wet.

And there was a time, my sweet
When I would have lied
And told the world that I had leapt -
Only to climb free
In victory.

Instead, I find myself
Warmed by the updraft,
Thrilled by possibilities,
Charmed by my own desire,
Knowing only
That this is where I remain.

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  • Guy Hogan on Jan 25, 2010

    The words and the photo fit together perfectly. The poem specks to me.

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 25, 2010

    Nice words.

  • GWitt on Jan 25, 2010

    Deep and meaningful. It seems to come from the hurt soul of the past.

  • ken bultman on Jan 26, 2010

    Love the progression of this write. Can identifiy.

  • ken bultman on Jan 26, 2010

    Love the progression of this poem. Can identify.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 26, 2010

    excellent share

  • cardy on Jan 26, 2010

    A lovely flow to this a great post liked this a lot.

  • amandeep13 on Jan 26, 2010

    Great Work

    Well Done

  • mkd1788 on Jan 26, 2010

    great though..i loved this..

  • ashan1614 on Jan 26, 2010

    I like this a lot. It is an accurate descrition of our experiences with love. When we are young and brave (and dumb), we jump in with both feet, not really knowing what it’s all about. We get hurt and find ourselves despising love and everything about it. Then we start to play games because we don’t want to be hurt again…. Will you leap over the edge and take a chance???

  • ashan1614 on Jan 26, 2010

    descrition??? DESCRIPTION! If only I could spell. :)

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 26, 2010

    Imagitive words from a gifted writer.

  • standingproud on Jan 26, 2010

    wonderfully penned, with great feeling and passion.

  • Gwen Dubeau on May 8, 2012

    Really nice Chris, smooth flow, vivid image..great poem.

  • brian miller on May 8, 2012

    smiles…i like this…many would just jump off the cliff…but in that moment before…when the warm wind is in your face…it is a beautiful moment…i like this…

  • Anna :o] on May 10, 2012

    I really like this – excellently penned.

    Anna :o ]

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