http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/ Sat, 21 Nov 2009 22:07:57 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/comment-page-1/#comment-566387 Dendro Azures Mon, 01 Dec 2008 01:42:44 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/#comment-566387 Very nicely done. I like how the fantasy of what we want is replaced with what it really is. Very nicely done. I like how the fantasy of what we want is replaced with what it really is.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/comment-page-1/#comment-566385 Rebekah Humphrey Tue, 25 Nov 2008 20:54:38 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/#comment-566385 Nicely writen, with deep thought. I like the way you have put in the fantasy elements, and talked about childhood games. Nicely writen, with deep thought. I like the way you have put in the fantasy elements, and talked about childhood games.

]]> http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/comment-page-1/#comment-566383 Jeoffrey Meister Sun, 23 Nov 2008 15:57:20 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/pretend-world/#comment-566383 Very nice, Pamela. Your poem reminds me of an old song, Puff The Magic Dragon by Peter, Paul and Mary. Very nice, Pamela. Your poem reminds me of an old song, Puff The Magic Dragon by Peter, Paul and Mary.

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