A condition that is not pretty or attractive.

I am in my best outfit

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But I am extremely sick

I just left the night club

And I feel like @#$%@@

I am not driving

Because that would not be responsible

Yet I am not smart enough to control

My party mode

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I realize that it is not fun

To feel like your head is a drum

To be in this condition

With my face buried in the toilet bowl

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Pretty drunk is a feeling I do not want to repeat

Besides my head have the sounds of a thousand loud drums off beat

I am ready to go home and get off my feet

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  • BluSphere on Jun 22, 2011

    Interesting and certainly different poem.. Liked it.

    Best regards,
    Blu

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jun 22, 2011

    Great poem Will, but can your really leave that stuff alone? :)
    Good luck.

  • BluSphere on Jun 23, 2011

    Like your comment Cynthia :D

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