A poem of intense intimacy.

Lightly they begin peeling away inhibitions
Being what they truly are just for each other
Intertwining themselves tightly
With passion from deep  within flowing forth to each other
Allowing nothing to disturb their  delight
Intensely their rapture grows
They are one and cannot be separated
Wild are the movements yet a rhythm has taken hold
The heat of passion thunders in their hearts
Wanting more of each other and giving all that they are
Building the power within themselves
It tingles their senses
Primitive they have become like animals of nature
Their love is fierce and fiery
Exploding from within their souls
Crashing through their bodies striking them into ecstasy
Sapping this energy away
Leaving them in each others arms
Quietly

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Comments (4)
  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 26, 2008

    What a fantastic description!

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Dec 26, 2008

    This poem describes the intimacy very well.

  • lisa on Dec 26, 2008

    I totally agree with Darla. :)

  • Palestrya on Mar 17, 2011

    Nice poem. . .

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