Primitive

Ranveer Singh Battu on Dec 4, 2010

Tags: cave, nature, primitive

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I would rather be worse
than one of ordinary men…..

if I have a chance,

I will not live it over again.

I would rather be worse,

Than one of ordinary men.

I would rather live caves,

Than lonely dens.

I would rather go see,

Than read a pen.

I would rather be naked,

And feel the wind.

Walk barefoot,

Bleed again.

I would rather fetch food,

Than eat a sin.

My mother called me,

I didn’t listen…..

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webseowriters on Dec 4, 2010
Thanks for sharing
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 4, 2010
ur undergoing hormonal changes
that’s natural at ur age
read sangeeta’s how to handle adolocents
and my remarks also there in
u will become more positive
u need good company
i wrote a poem too
reaad it tis for uuuuu
fragile18 on Dec 29, 2010
thanks for sharing
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 2, 2011
did u read my comments ???

if u don’t listen to ur mom

how will u discern

LOVE GOD SENT
I WONDER
SON
IF ur ONE
Jordan Sawchuk on Jan 8, 2011
great poem, Ranveer… a pleasure to read

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