Our senses have sealed our bodies in cells with no place to turn. Regardless of what we do we remain imprisoned by their whims.

Many of us are trapped

And we don’t know it

We’re unable to realize

That our senses

Call the shots

- – -

Imagine if you’re blind

What will your world be?

Only vague imaginations

Of reality

Even if you’re not

That’s also the case

- – -

If you are blind

And deaf

You’ll know even less

Now you’ll have to depend

On your taste

For insight

To try to be right

- – -

If your taste goes

That leaves

You with a nose

To smell

And your tender touch

- – -

All these senses

Impact reality

Directly or indirectly

- – -

They imprison us 

To perceive a world

According to their dictates

- – -

In other words

We’re held prisoners

By our senses

With no place to turn

- – -

We can’t break out

Of these iron cells

For they are sealed tight

- – -

Cover of Senses (Kingfisher Young Knowledge)

- – -

We might feel

That we’re free

But our intuiton

Knows otherwise

- – -

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Comments (14)
  • mphsglo on Jan 5, 2012

    Very interesting. *thinking*

  • straw1979 on Jan 5, 2012

    nice

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jan 5, 2012

    good

  • megamatt09 on Jan 5, 2012

    Very sound points.

  • prsol46 on Jan 5, 2012

    Never thought of it that way, nice work!

  • aheed411 on Jan 5, 2012

    Very nice

  • ThinkingBeing on Jan 5, 2012

    We are nothing but our senses, that’s so true.

  • Tulan on Jan 5, 2012

    points well taken, we’re definitely tied to our senses.

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 5, 2012

    imagine imagining

  • A Bromley on Jan 5, 2012

    Definitely thoughts to ponder and a reminder to be ever so thankful for sense and senses we have. Good write

  • lapasan on Jan 5, 2012

    We are prisoner of our senses. But they are very important to us.

  • MJRapp on Jan 5, 2012

    Very good!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 6, 2012

    I have never really thought about this before but you are quite right. A good poem.

  • yes me on Jan 6, 2012

    Like Erwin cheers

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