Dog haiku.


Alert and on guard

in case some thing should enter

here uninvited

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  • HeyZel on Jun 25, 2009

    Ohh. My dog once bit a man who tried to steal my grandma’s flower pots outside our house.
    :P

  • Deep Blue on Jun 25, 2009

    We have a haiku fever I see. nice.

  • goodselfme on Jun 25, 2009

    the cute doggie draws my attention.

  • Hugo La Rosa on Jun 25, 2009

    A dog is barking.
    Suddenly, the thief
    splashes the pond!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 25, 2009

    Ken, that’s a good one.

  • Sheila M on Jun 25, 2009

    What happens when one of those ghosts you have around there floats on in?

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 26, 2009

    Very cute. I love the picture too.

    Christine

  • Teresa M Sims on Jun 26, 2009

    funny and cute

  • kate smedley on Jun 26, 2009

    Funny haiku

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 26, 2009

    Cute terrier. I’d rather enter a house guarded by a Dobie than one of these.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 26, 2009

    Great haiku and I love the pic.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jun 26, 2009

    Awww what a cute poem and photo.I hope his bark is bigger then he is though,I’d break in just to pet your cute little dog.hehe.Great work as always ken,you know I’m a fan.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jun 26, 2009

    cute!

  • PR Mace on Jun 27, 2009

    Nice one. I love dogs.

  • Sky Lumina on Jun 28, 2009

    hehe, cute one :)

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 14, 2009

    Well done! I smiled immediately….but guys, the joke may be on us. The dog may just be guarding this site!

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