Promise I’ll Tell You

quiet voice on Mar 29, 2011

Don’t think too long, make it an active thing, do it.

Now, if I could just get to sleep,

My brain would be well rested,

Ready for my next big venture.

But I lie here thinking of you,

How I think you are just the greatest.

Not that you are that good looking,

But you are one of the nicest humans,

I have ever met during my lifetime,

You are caring, comforting and affable.

All things that one would want,

You are not selfish, you like to share.

I just want to tell you these things.

So guess what? I think I will.

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V rank on Mar 29, 2011
Simply enjoyable and so direct to the point…
BC Doan on Mar 30, 2011
It doesn\’t matter how he/she looks when love comes knocking on your heart..Wonderful poem!
Vivek Ratan on Mar 31, 2011
Brilliant lines
When love combines
Heart sings poem
On heartbeats’ rhymes
Your each word beautifully shines
A true friend you well define

Lovely poem,quiet voice

God bless you.
Freethinking on Apr 1, 2011
The piece you have presented is an honest look at superficial beauty versus inner beauty and you mastered it superbly.

Hi there!