Proof of Love

Jasin on Apr 7, 2009

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When true love doesn’t return its affection.

I love my strong woman but she doesn’t remember her strong man, to forget that I am important is to forget our plan.

I will not die silently in this dark, for every spark and slight ignite I will try with every breath to make things right.

I love you my dear the rest is up to you, proof of your love is all I ask and I’m hoping one day it will prove our love’s true.

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Dee Gold on Apr 7, 2009
Nice piece
George W Whitehead on Apr 7, 2009
Lovely poem.
Eunice on Apr 7, 2009
Hello Jasin, long time no see.
Your poem is so sweet.
weegysgram on Apr 7, 2009
nice poem.
Yovita Siswati on Apr 7, 2009
beautiful poem!
Darla Smith on Apr 7, 2009
Very nice poem.
Debra Mann on Apr 7, 2009
Wonderful poem, Jasin. Welcome back.
clay hurtubise on Apr 7, 2009
Nice, short, and to the point!
Thanks,
Clay
payge on Apr 7, 2009
What else can I do but agre with the previous comments?Its beautifully writen,short and to the point,I like it.
Poetic Enigma on Apr 7, 2009
This is a beautiful poem,
very wonderfully expressed
M J katz on Apr 8, 2009
How sad and futile. …”to forget that I am important…” is a terrible thing for that “strong woman” to do to you!
Love is a two-way street…either you are important to her or you’re not!
True love doesn’t need time to prove itself because it exists quite naturally in the life that you lead when you’re with the right person. When you’re not with the right person, things just don’t mesh together, and you frequently find yourself feeling insecure and miserable.
Remember…as long as you choose to remain with the wrong person, the right person cannot enter your life!
Inna Tysoe on Apr 8, 2009
Good one.

Inna
Liane Schmidt on Apr 8, 2009
Strong emotions conveyed in this piece*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
nutuba on Apr 8, 2009
Beautiful piece, Jasin. It’s a great reminder to me that I need to keep showing my wife how I love her. Love isn’t a static thing — it can’t sit on a shelf — but needs to be fed daily. Nicely done.
S A JOHNSON on Apr 8, 2009
Sweet
NA Staffieri on Apr 8, 2009
Alas – True love may not come today, my friend.
CutestPrincess on Apr 10, 2009
Nicely said and very deep indeed.
Joce Boldi on Apr 14, 2009
I always enjoy reading your work. Your articles and poems are one of the things I look forward to when logging on to Triond! Can’t wait to read more.
R G Lowry on Apr 15, 2009
That’s so lovely. What lovely things for a man to say x Well done
your mama on Apr 18, 2009
the answer is in your mirror,
face it.
Fresh Writing on May 9, 2009
Very beautiful poem…I agree with “your mama” (:))- the answer is in your mirror.

-Fresh Writing
Brian Daniel Stankich on Jun 5, 2009
good to approach her about it…
goodselfme on Jul 18, 2009
Beautifully penned poem. I miss your presence!
sweetievee on Jul 23, 2009
Sometimes we all get caught up in our lives, striving for things that aren’t really even that important and (especially if there are kids or other family members) taking care of other people. It’s not a good excuse, but it happens.

Part of the promise of commitment is communicating when things are slipping before they get too far out of hand that the other person is so detached that they aren’t concerned with doing the things they used to do. If after you let her know what you’d like from her, and she still doesn’t show respect for you and your relationship, then decisions have to be made. But it’s not safe to assume that anyone knows your frame of mind, or what you want them to do differently.
Ella Currence on Jul 30, 2009
Nice poem I enjoy reading it.

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