Pros and cons of life.

Accidents can be dangerous so can be delay.
Ignorance can be expensive, so can be carelessness.
Foolishness can be boredom so can be wisdom.
Past can be mentioned so can be desire.
Work can be appreciated so can be smartness.
Elders can be trusted so can be leaders.
Wealth can be banked so can be trust.
Food can be shared so can be joy.
After all of this Enjoy!!

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Comments (10)
  • Debbie Mann on Nov 24, 2008

    Intelligent insight! god bless.

  • Unofre Pili on Nov 24, 2008

    You’re really good. You’re literary.

  • Darla Smith on Nov 24, 2008

    I really like this one.

  • James DeVere on Nov 24, 2008

    After all that enjoy….enjoin? j

  • Dialga on Nov 24, 2008

    A poem that truly does express the positives and negatives of human life. Keep on writing!

  • lindalulu on Nov 24, 2008

    Good poem, I liked it a lot.

  • Inna Tysoe on Nov 24, 2008

    well-written

    Inna

  • katrina19 on Nov 25, 2008

    life is always, by surprise,,, be ready for it!

  • Saranya Sivakumar on Nov 26, 2008

    Your poem on life is very expensive. Go ahead.

  • Tina Cassello on Nov 26, 2008

    I’m not used to sentences being constructed the way you did with the so can be, but I understand your message. Very good.

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