Nice work: for me 18 years is enough, give me a cure!

thanks,

clay

This is a deep poem, I hope that the time to think is helping you to see things more clearly.

Very positive outlook.

Yes, the catharsis. Beautifully expressed.

it\’s very true, through depression, we tend to get out of it stronger and tougher… good descriptions, keep up the good work!

Depression is not good for our health. This poem clearly potrayed a good expression in dealing with it. Well done, give you \”liked it\”

Said with a lot of strength.

different take on depression big thumbs up

Depression is a nasty condition that can turn your life inside-out! Good attitude!

Nice one, Swati.

Depression is a scared word for me. Thanks for your good spirit.

Have faith on God,if he gives us sorrow at the same he gives us strength to face it even.

Very deep and meaningful.

Depression can paralyze one, this sounds more reflection or introspection & done very nicely.

God bless & take care.

Believe in yourself and hopefully things will be better for all of us.. take care..

I love this.

Interesting concept. thanks for sharing.

Depression sometimes overtakes us – it\’s like a coat that too small. When we discover ourself we can take off the coat. Your poem is intrigues me and it\’s haunting in the same moment.

Looking back in retrospect is certainly a good self evaluation. We can all learn much about ourselves from this perspective. A well crafted piece of writing.
Monica.

Great One

A beautiful way expressing painful emotions by giving it hope!

Interesting and positive outlook on a very tough subject! Smartly done!