Proverb 2

Darren Goad on Jan 17, 2009

Tags: glory, mistakes, poem, Poetry, proverb, simple, simplicity, the time is now

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Another musing on why we do what we do.

Starting simple is easy.
Keeping it simple is another story.
We go awry and amiss
when we seek for glory.

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Comments (10)

jimy1666 on Jan 17, 2009
nice one keep it up
goodselfme on Jan 17, 2009
Gentle write with deep meaning.
Lauren Axelrod on Jan 17, 2009
Running and reading. Authspot is on fire today.
Lola Ade on Jan 17, 2009
That was actually simple but beautiful. I liked it.
Debra. on Jan 17, 2009
Nice write, my friend.

God bless
Bo Russo on Jan 17, 2009
Darren I love this.I really admire it when people like you can say so much with so little,I can’t do it.Kudos.
AC Hamilton III on Jan 17, 2009
A truth clearly spoken. Well Done.

AC
Michele Cameron Drew on Jan 18, 2009
Darren’s daily dose of proverbial verse. Reminds me of my old PIM days. Very well done.

-M
nutuba on Jan 20, 2009
Wow, this is excellent. It’s so elegant and eloquent, concisely stated. Well done!
eddiego65 on Jan 23, 2009
Very good. I like this!

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