Pun Intended

Riley Themend on Feb 7, 2009

Tags: Life, people, pun, stress

Someone needs to wake me.

I have a bad case of being stressed,
someone needs to wake me.
if i could ask for just one thing,
i’d want someone to break me.
not literally.
just to break me out of the foolish mold
of everyday designs
to wander, worry, eat and sleep
without someone to hurt me.
Not physically.
Just someone who seems to bring me down
wondering how far i can stretch
oh how i need to pass these tests
pun intended.

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cardy on Feb 7, 2009
nice nice work liked this.
rutherfranc on Feb 7, 2009
in search of a soul mate are you? very clever use of words..
miss cornelia on Feb 8, 2009
I read it twice and I don’t understand it. Is Rutherfranc right, does it mean you’re looking for a relationship?
Riley Themend on Feb 8, 2009
Haha actually far from the truth. It’s a play on words, I had some tests to take at school, but i also was stressed about challenges out of school with like finding a job, so i wrote that poem.
Poetic Enigma on Feb 9, 2009
This is a great poem,
very well written!
hfj on Feb 9, 2009
Good poem. Stress can come in many forms, school, work, out of work, and relationships. You said it very well in your write.
denus on Feb 10, 2009
Great poem,

cheers,

denus
M Stokes on Feb 11, 2009
Great poem, I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Michele Cameron Drew on Feb 12, 2009
Well done, my friend. Things that make ya go…

-M

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