A different look at a nursery rhyme. Those cats can be so naughty, can’t they? Naughty and manipulative. That’s why I’m not a cat person, give me a faithful dog any day.

Pussy cat, pussy cat
You’ve got to move out!
Not so loud, no need to shout.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
What have you done?
I ate all the meat, now there is none.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
What should I do?
Don’t scream and yell, don’t throw your shoe.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
Why cause me stress?
I know you like it when I cause a mess.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
Will you ever be good?
If you feed me and love me just as you should.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
Have you no shame?
What about you? You’d do the same.
Pussy cat, pussy cat
What can I say?
Say that you’ll love me every day.

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Comments (6)
  • a.king on Feb 8, 2008

    cute!

  • quiet voice on Feb 8, 2008

    Hi,
    This is an interesting
    piece. I find it funny,
    but also sense a struggle
    for who is in charge.
    Very much of an inside
    story going on. Good job!

  • Carolyn Cordon on Feb 8, 2008

    Hi, I wrote this poem for a poet friend of mine – she’s a cat person, I’m a dog person, but we get on fine anyway!

    I’ve lived with a cat once, she belonged to my husband when I first met him. Emma & I got on OK, but I wasn’t sad when she went to live somewhere else – she was happy to go too – she never forgave us for bringing a schnauzer pup into the household.

    Cats intrigue me though, and I’ve written many poems about them, trying to get inside the feline mind. I feel this poem is the closest one, but cat lovers may disagree.

  • Morgan Bell on May 14, 2009

    nice work Carolyn!
    i love cats, and apparently i act like one :)

  • Carolyn Cordon on Jan 19, 2010

    Thanks Morgan, you cute little kitty kat you!

  • jennyreeve on Apr 26, 2012

    This is a good poem, it gets the mind working.

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