Pyramid

Phoenix Montoya on Sep 18, 2010

Tags: life poem, Pyramid, pyramid poem, Sad poem, tomb of kings

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Another cold tomb.

Image by sierragoddess

I

see

image

of beau

structure

of grandeur

Historys mark

alas such place

of gloom and pain

a servants ill fate!

to die with a master

Pyramid- tomb of kings!

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Comments (11)

Jimmy Shilaho on Sep 18, 2010
A small cute piece.
PSingh1990 on Sep 18, 2010
Nice Share.
My World on Sep 18, 2010
Nice post………….

thanks for share.
yes me on Sep 18, 2010
Liked that cheers
Kaye TM on Sep 18, 2010
wow.love the structure of the poem and how it is written/typed. amazing!
Anuradha Ramkumar on Sep 24, 2010
Truly a pyramid. Constructed a pyramid structure with your words…gr8.
BC Doan on Sep 24, 2010
I like the way you play with this structure!
J M Lennox on Sep 28, 2010
How nice – a creative shape poem. Very well done (including the actual poem – words, of course).
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 7, 2010
Wow! Creative indeed! Your poem looks like a pyramid invertly.
Ubel Ein on Oct 10, 2010
Good grief… I’m addicted to your poems now!
1hopefulman on Jan 12, 2011
Great poem in words and shape!

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