We argued..

‘What if?  Maybe..

thought so, can it be?’

‘Oh! No.. No you see,

it’s one of the tricks!

life’s deadly pricks.’

 .

‘Again?’ asked she.

Why couldn’t it be?

life laughed amusingly.

then silence raged.

and she felt caged.

 .

‘But why me?

Why the misery?’

asked she bleakly.

Pain followed.

Her soul hollowed.

 .

‘I hate thee!

don’t you see?’

echoed life, in glee.

Then it hit,

to her in fit.

 .

When she cried..

all life had lied!

though she had tried..

She had failed.

Fate had hailed.

 .

Almost lost,

her love’s cost.

Throwed and tossed,

She rose again,

through the pain.

 .

To catch her dreams,

hard as it would seem.

With eyes that gleam,

neverthless.

breathless..

 .

‘Hope.’,she said..

‘is life’s thread..

to which I tread!

surely someday..

surely someway..

 .

I’ll win from yee!

there’ll be a stronger me.

and you’ll give to me,

yourself helplesly

and completly.’

 .

‘You amuse me!

Impress me..

And challenged me.

There isn’t any,

reason a many..

 .

to decline you,

perish you,

or deny you.

of what you craved,

and all you braved.’

 .

said life to me.

And so it be.

My HOPE had won me…

What once was a DREAM.

floating on LIFE’S streams.

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Comments (12)
  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 23, 2011

    well written

  • Abee.A on Jun 23, 2011

    thankyou! =)

  • Borhan on Jun 23, 2011

    Great!

  • Abee.A on Jun 23, 2011

    thank you Borhan =)

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 24, 2011

    very good

  • Nali on Jun 24, 2011

    I like your style of writing, it’s so addictive to read on, and on and on :P , nice one btw :P

  • Abee.A on Jun 24, 2011

    Thankyou Martin Kloess =)

  • Abee.A on Jun 24, 2011

    Wow,thankyou Nali..for liking my work,I appreciate it! =D

  • Wafa on Jun 24, 2011

    that’s something a PIECE!….each and every word hit me!! loved it!

  • Abee.A on Jun 25, 2011

    thankyou so much wafa =D !

  • Babrus on Nov 15, 2011

    good show larki. come on tumblr.com too :)

  • Abee.A on Nov 15, 2011

    lol thankyou, Babrus!! =) yup okay I’ll try there too!

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