Oh, give me a shot of that whiskey, my life makes me need it so much…

So, give me a shot of that whiskey
And quickly, because I’m in a rush

The liquor, when quicker, is thrilling
The feeling I get is found ease
So, quickly I’ll drink without spilling
Give me that shot right now, please

I have dollars a plenty to give you
My money is quite good I’d say
I’ll tell you right now what to do
Just leave me the bottle, I’ll pay

So…
Give me a shot of that whiskey
You know I can handle it well
For when I get drunk I get frisky
So, if I’m with you, please don’t tell

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Comments (5)
  • C. Jordan on Oct 3, 2008

    Nice one, with a grin at the end.

  • Darla Smith on Oct 3, 2008

    Great poem.

  • goodselfme on Oct 3, 2008

    This spry little ditty is cute and well done.

  • Kim Buck on Oct 3, 2008

    Are we related?

  • Fabian C on Oct 5, 2008

    Ha ha! Cheeky boy.

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