The characteristic of Quicksand is that is kills.

Sucks you deeper,

Till you die miserably.

Grab a rope

Pull yourself out

And live again.

By Anisha Achankunju (C) 15th January 2011

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  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 15, 2011

    good share

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 15, 2011

    Nice little piece.

  • Stable on Jan 15, 2011

    This really appeals to me, love it, I really do

  • albert1jemi on Jan 16, 2011

    gud work

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