Race Against Time

drelayaraja on Dec 18, 2009

Tags: burden, drelayaraja, elayaraja, eyeballs, heart, love, race, romance, scan, she, time

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Eye balls forget to move when one meets another………..

Race Against Time

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

It’s a race against time

when we are together,

Eyeballs forget to move

When one meets another..

.. ….. …

She made me to bear

The burden on love,

If you scan my heart

You can see her now…

© 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Comments (25)

Sharif Ishnin on Dec 18, 2009
Nice poem Dr E.:)
redmail99 on Dec 18, 2009
beautiful
johnnydod on Dec 18, 2009
nice link with poem and pictures
K.Reshma on Dec 18, 2009
Very beautiful
mkd1788 on Dec 18, 2009
great work…
papaleng on Dec 18, 2009
such a well-written poem, sweet and touching.
vb545323 on Dec 18, 2009
Nice Job! =)
diamondpoet on Dec 18, 2009
Cute, creative, and funny, great job.
Videomark on Dec 18, 2009
I really like the 2nd picture. Nice job.
Linda Lori on Dec 18, 2009
Nice! Love the pics too!
Alexis Flint on Dec 18, 2009
I like the pictures, but I’m not sure I get the poem.
albert1jemi on Dec 18, 2009
beautiful words
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 18, 2009
That was so sweet.
AlmaG on Dec 18, 2009
That’s a wonderful poem and indeed touching
Teves on Dec 18, 2009
Great post..
Eunice Tan on Dec 19, 2009
A good poem
8Shei8 on Dec 19, 2009
so cute!
LovelyWolf on Dec 19, 2009
So nice i’m speecless!
jaysonv on Dec 19, 2009
Nice piece. i liked it.
Roberto Sardelli 1 on Dec 19, 2009
beautiful poem, I loved it
lillyrose on Dec 21, 2009
lovely poem x
serowa on Dec 22, 2009
How romantic and real. Great poem
Patrick Regoniel on Dec 24, 2009
That’s a nice one.
jaysland on Dec 27, 2009
Great write. It made me think of my wife and how she captures me.
fragile18 on Jan 3, 2010
that was sweet

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