Racing against time. Not getting enough time to get things done.

I am on another site,

writing in a writers’-race.

That is why I seem out of sight,

I hope you miss my face.

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I must apologize to all my pals.

on Triond, you all rock.

I promise to come back to you,

more we need to talk.

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I hope you forgive me for my pace,

I am trying my very best.

Once I am out of this daze,

I promise to be your good ol’ pest. :D

NOTE: I keep publishing work here, as I republish it on the other site for the races. I am trying to help my team as much as I can. I promise to read and comment on all your work in sometime. Please bear with me and I assure you, I never forget friends. :)

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  • aniket on Jan 11, 2010

    no rox please dont leave me alone..sob.sob

  • standingproud on Jan 11, 2010

    My weee dear friend I will wait for you forever cos your so special.xxx

  • standingproud on Jan 11, 2010

    :) :) :) :) :) :)
    :P :P :P :P :P

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 11, 2010

    I know how hard it is to keep up with all the different commitments.

  • lillyrose on Jan 11, 2010

    LOL….stop worrying what other may or may not think! you are cool girl and we are happy to see you when we can! good luck with the race!

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 11, 2010

    will miss you, that’s for sure, see you when you your back again…kool….

  • ken bultman on Jan 11, 2010

    We’re patient.

  • drelayaraja on Jan 11, 2010

    Nice one :)

    Its time factor for all :)

    Thank U -_-

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Jan 11, 2010

    I do understand..I too face this prblem sumtimes..commenting on both sides… our articles r not running away anywhere..Lol…so u can chk them out anytime… :)

  • ashan1614 on Jan 11, 2010

    Rox, it’s all good. Do what you need to do then come back and visit. :)

  • magicdarts on Jan 11, 2010

    too many articles and sites , never enough time – but you are always welcome here!

  • simplyoj on Jan 11, 2010

    Same here Rox. I didn’t get to visit all my friends updates. We do all understand. :-D

  • albert1jemi on Jan 11, 2010

    come soon all the best waiting for u

  • hfj on Jan 11, 2010

    We all do what we gotta do,
    and that doesn’t mean we won’t miss you
    So when you get caught up at another place,
    we’ll all look forward to seeing your smiling face.

    Nice haiku PhoenixRox. well done.

  • Starpisces on Jan 11, 2010

    no problem Rox, my posts will not be erased (hopefully), you can read slowly…and if you have more time to spare later, you can read from my page 1 (10 Sept 2009 onwards, that time you don’t know me yet).. hee hee hee.
    but, it’s true, I do miss you…
    here’s a smile for you :p

  • Starpisces on Jan 11, 2010

    oh, why my smiley did not appear, let me try again, if still canot work, nevermind, just imagine a smiling face with a red tongue…
    :p

  • Starpisces on Jan 11, 2010

    what happen to my screen? I have just commented and when I returned, my comments were gone, if you see duplicate or triplicate means technical fault!

    I was saying :
    No problem Rox. You can read my posts slowly as long as they are not erased (hopefully), and later when you have more time to spare, you can read from page 1 (since Sept 10, that time you don’t know me yet), ha ha ha
    I do miss you, and here’s a smiling face with a red tongue, in case it don’t work, you just imagine the red tongue will do, ok..ha ha..
    :P

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 11, 2010

    Excuses, excuses…just kidding! :P Good luck in your race! Kick butt! LOL.

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 11, 2010

    Ditto and I am sorting out my work, it is getting too much. Take care

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 11, 2010

    Good luck to you Phoenix. Don\’t worry. We will still be here when you get back.

    Christine

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 11, 2010

    Good luck to you Phoenix. Don’t worry. We will still be here when you get back.

    Christine

  • livemike on Jan 11, 2010

    Great poem and i see you you have a few fans??Love to see more poetry from you..

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Jan 11, 2010

    Absence makes the heart grow fonder. So, who knows you just never know who might fall in love with you. lol. lol.

  • Anamika S on Jan 11, 2010

    I understand that it is difficult to be in several sites at the same time. But you can find a way to participate in the community. I also write articles on HubPages, InfoBarrel and a couple of other content sites apart from Triond. When i am not publishing thereatleast comment on some articles or participate in the forums of those sites because I do not want to be “out of sight, Out of mind’.

    I am sure people here (including me) would miss your work if you don’t publish here. So don’t be away for long and break our hearts.

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 11, 2010

    No need to apologize. Wonderful poetry as well.

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 11, 2010

    lol, I think you summed up the feeling of most of us at some point in time… !
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Greg Seltz on Jan 11, 2010

    Which site is this

  • alliewal on Jan 11, 2010

    You’ve got to do what you’ve got to do.

  • PhoenixRox on Jan 12, 2010

    @Greg- U know the site and thank u all.. *Hugs*!!

  • AlmaG on Jan 12, 2010

    I understand :)

  • Starpisces on Jan 12, 2010

    now i know about the smiley with the red tongue.. must type the leter “p” in capital….

    aiyoh…………..

    :P

  • Midie on Jan 12, 2010

    Maybe you can win the match with the time. Be a winner and welcome back…

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jan 12, 2010

    that was simply beautiful writing. always looking forward to reading your works and understand the pressures faced. great work!

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