While driving the other night I noticed that the moon was following me.

I was driving home the other night.

and the moon kept following me.

I couldn’t seem to lose the moon.

I drove quickly,  and the moon also moved quickly.

I pulled into the driveway,

and immediately parked my car,

I slammed the car door,

ran into the house and locked the door.

I felt safe at that point.

For the moon was no longer following me.

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Comments (8)
  • LoveDoctor on Nov 13, 2009

    Very creative. I love the shape of the moon and yes it does move at the same speed as us I have noticed. excellent

  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    Thank you sunshine you did get it.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 13, 2009

    Yes, perhaps. But of tomorrow night. Incidentally, in which direction were you driving.

  • ceegirl on Nov 13, 2009

    nice poet

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • Kristina Angel on Nov 13, 2009

    Creative one (^.^)

    http://www.broadonline.co.nr

  • Raja on Nov 13, 2009

    The moon followed you and I am following your writing. Well penned article.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 14, 2009

    Very cute article. We have all experienced this in some form as kids

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