How I will be the best for you, if you work hard for my love.

At this hour, my heart is pure as 24 karats.
My life is as sure as the one who bears it.
Hold me closely.
Lift me to the sifting glass.
A rose is homely, next to your gentle grasp.
Take your cloak and shine my face.
Give me your sweat.
I’ll give you my radiance.
As a beautiful woman, inside and out…
I’ll shine like no other.
I am pure as you bear me.
Hold me closely.
Through sifting glass.
Remember the roses.
Sweat, even tears.
I give my radiance.

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Comments (5)
  • Liane Schmidt on Feb 29, 2008

    This is absolutely lovely. It’s soft, romantic – timeless and lovely.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Tarra B. on Mar 2, 2008

    beautiful and passionate!

  • Lucy Lockett on Mar 4, 2008

    It is very soft and welcoming, nice.

  • Susan B. Anna on Mar 5, 2008

    Very nice and true to your soul. Thanks for sharing.

  • Gerlaine on Mar 9, 2008

    Thank you Liane, Tarra, Lucy, and Susan! ~G

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