Rain

diamondpoet on Oct 29, 2009

Tags: dampness, Rain

I love the rain.

Water trickling down my face.

Seems to wet me in every space.

I feel the dampness all over me.

Being wet makes my clothes heavy.

I open my mouth, it touches my tongue.

I feel a cold sensation when this is done.

I love to see the rain drops fall.

What a smell it makes in the air as I recall.

When the rain stops.

I watch the last drop.

The clouds start to break away

The Sun bursts out and clears the gray.

I can’t wait until the next rain day comes.

So I can continue my wet and wonderful fun.

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jessicuslevi on Oct 29, 2009
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ashan1614 on Oct 29, 2009
Rain cleanses the air and our heads at times.
Guy Hogan on Oct 29, 2009
The rain is magic, isn’t it? Everything seems cleaner after a good rain. Rain gives life to the earth and the earth gives life to us.
Patrick Regoniel on Oct 29, 2009
I recalled bathing in the rain when I was a child. Nice read!
Aiyanna on Oct 29, 2009
Its beautiful, can actually picture what you have written Good write!!!
Snooky on Oct 29, 2009
Hey! Here in Phoenix everybody runs outdoors when it rains.. It’s like a holiday, time to make merry. It is refreshing even to read about rain, you parlez that very well..
Ahhhhh Yor poem is exilarating !!!!
big "dick" richard on Oct 29, 2009
niar is rain spelled backwards.
Angela Christy on Oct 29, 2009
Your poem reminds me of my childhood. I used to dance and sing in the middle of the rain. Now, you wrote it beautifully in your poem. Thanks for sharing!
Ricky Taylor on Oct 29, 2009
That was beautifully done. Keep it up. ~Ricky
Eunice Tan on Oct 29, 2009
Hate and love relationship with rain.
RayFree on Oct 30, 2009
Great write! I can’t stand being wet though lol
monica55 on Oct 30, 2009
I like the rain actually. A nice gentle rain relaxes me, so I enoy this poem thoroughly.
Monica
Sharif Ishnin on Oct 30, 2009
Yes, rain brings dead things back to life. It’s a gift.
Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009
Lovely poem.
Jane Jane on Oct 30, 2009
I love rain but when it’s a heavy rain, that’s gonna be another story.
neet on Oct 30, 2009
I luv rain too……….and till today I haven’t yet missd a single chance to get wet in the rain.Beautiful poem.
ken bultman on Oct 30, 2009
Send some my way. Big time dry summer and fall.
raptor22 on Oct 30, 2009
I’ve had enough of rain. Nice poem though.
Cebah on Oct 31, 2009
Nice poem, try living in the UK and you\’d soon get sick of it though! Rain rain go away…
Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 31, 2009
i am with you, i love the rain.
PhoenixRox on Oct 31, 2009
I love getting drenched in the rain too.. Especially the first rain of the season. Great, fun-filled poem there!

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