Rain and Tears (Haiku)

Cyni1106 on May 28, 2011

Tags: cheeks, Rain, showers, Tears, waterfalls

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One and the same in some way.

Water falls like rain

Tears roll down my cheek

Showers to renew the spirit.

By Cynthia Aholelei (C) May 28, 2011

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yellow rose on May 28, 2011
Broad beans as heavy tears
Fall from the sky clouded
Lightning cross the night
Wind knocks continually.
sanaahmed on May 28, 2011
well sharing
Christine Ramsay on May 28, 2011
You are quite right. Both of them bring renewal. Nice work.
Inzimam on May 28, 2011
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The Quail 1957 on May 28, 2011
Excellent Haiku! Your right they both bring a kind of peace.
kanivel on May 28, 2011
Nice haiku.
Martin Kloess on May 29, 2011
Now, you knew i’d like this.
chandrra on May 29, 2011
Exactly !!!!! very well written…..I like it.
Sebastian Onciu on May 29, 2011
Great Haiku!
ravitej on May 30, 2011
great.
Dreamy777 on May 30, 2011
nice work
Peace Poet on May 30, 2011
This is a very powerful haiku. The last line is highly enlightening.
athena goodlight on May 30, 2011
lovely haiku

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