Rain Drop

paigeadelaide on Aug 19, 2009

It was a rainy day and I sat at my window watching the rain pass me and got a little bored and wrote this poem

My Beginning is on the earth,

I slowly rise above and come back down,

Peacefully laying upon the lips of earth’s leaves and drenching your hair,

I slither down your clothes and hydrate the fabric the wool once belonging to your sheep,the Cotton too,

Hydrating your foreign lands i turn around and start my cycle again,

The rivers,the seas, the canals

The clouds,

Evaporation,condensation,

And back to earth’s natural grounds

By Paige Adelaide

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Comments (12)

Christine Ramsay on Aug 19, 2009
A lovely and poetic description of the water cycle. Good work.

Christine
giftarist on Aug 19, 2009
Nice illustration in words! I like it!
Marie Milton on Aug 19, 2009
Rain drops are beautiful : ) You’ve created yet another picture with your written words : ) Nice one.
ken bultman on Aug 19, 2009
Nice portrayal of a normal weather occurrence. Well done.
alc on Aug 19, 2009
Like the way you take somthing that occurs natually and find a way to make it personal!!
ashan1614 on Aug 19, 2009
Never thought there was anything poetic about the water cycle – you proved me wrong.
ceegirl on Aug 19, 2009
I like to see rain to from inside but, not in the rain
Goodselfme on Aug 19, 2009
Beautifully done! GREAT!
Jeremy James Noye on Aug 19, 2009
Fantastic! Very well done!
MF Raguett on Aug 19, 2009
very nice…
Joie Schmidt on Aug 22, 2009
Unique, good work.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
teddybear55 on Sep 17, 2009
Very nicely written. A great job. I enjoyed reading about the cycle of rain. You described it ever so beautifully. Well done.

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