A poem of faith and spirituality.


Pain and rain rhyme for a reason
Rain is like tears from God
Cry and die sound the same
I wonder if it’s a coincidence?

If it rains when you die
Does that mean God is happy
Because you’re going to Him
Or sad for those you left behind?                                                 

I can’t wait for the mists in summer
To walk out in the warm rain
It’s like God is with me
And I want to sing.

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  • Lord Banks on Mar 2, 2011

    Yes a good poem here I really liked the last verse, well done. LB

  • elnavann on Mar 2, 2011

    I like your poem

  • smidggy on Mar 2, 2011

    I like the poem as well! Great share!

  • Steve Weitzner on Mar 2, 2011

    Very good poem.

  • paypay566 on Mar 2, 2011

    I really like this 1. It relates to me alot in difrant ways.

  • Martin Kloess on Mar 2, 2011

    Very nice poem

  • nz2rdfox on Mar 2, 2011

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  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 3, 2011

    good read

  • Ima Vee on Mar 3, 2011

    a touching piece of poetry… great..:-]

  • albert1jemi on Mar 3, 2011

    Nice Share

  • Martin Kloess on Mar 5, 2011

    very nice

  • vijayanths on Mar 5, 2011

    Nice poem.

  • DR.VNS on Mar 5, 2011

    Nice poem

  • FX777222999 on Mar 5, 2011

    Good poem with rhythm and balance. Thanks

  • cacaritalucu on Mar 5, 2011

    fascinating poem, i like this.

  • galore on Mar 5, 2011

    beautiful poem

  • Rhodora Bande on Mar 5, 2011

    Great imagery.

  • 1hopefulman on Mar 5, 2011

    Rain is a good thing as it makes things grow.

  • Tulan on Mar 5, 2011

    that is perfectly beautiful.

  • Edsss on Mar 6, 2011

    I like it very much!

  • Martin Kloess on Mar 6, 2011

    very nice work

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 6, 2011

    You are such a great poet
    That more read you,
    Than any of my poems have been read
    Now about 3920 plus

    You are a poet!
    We all have to make a start,
    Sometime, some where
    And
    Unless we endeavour
    We shall never reach our destination,
    But wait get up early
    But
    Never be late,
    For life is a gift of divine,
    Yours and mine

  • c4collins on Mar 7, 2011

    Beautiful, honest and pure…thanks for sharing, and God bless your creativity for Him!!

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 7, 2011

    nice share

  • Ubel Ein on Mar 8, 2011

    Great poem, Heloni Lynn!!

  • britwalkz on Mar 11, 2011

    this is an amaing poem:)

  • shakugan123 on Mar 11, 2011

    when it rains it pours
    giving the sky a dull color
    same with tears of sorrow
    that ceases all the glow
    but after the rain,
    sun will shine

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