Rain of stars, Star shower, Star fall…

A soft rain envelops my senses
From top to bottom, I see only water.
Holy Water from heaven,
falling soft, liquid, gentle drops

I feel an intoxicating peace around
I breathe and I become airborne.
The trees move to the sound of wind
So cute, so soft, so slow, gentle drops

Slowly the rain is stopping,
The gray clouds in seconds, they disappear.
The sky clears and stars appear,
Giant stars, bright and beautiful. stars that become drops

Rain of stars, Star shower, Star fall…
light and water, peace and hope…
A glow, a drop, stars, rain…

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  • Dreamy777 on Jun 30, 2011

    very nice poem

  • beingwell on Jun 30, 2011

    Nice poem.

  • T. S. Lewis on Jul 7, 2011

    Raining stars is a wonderful idea. Great write.

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