This is my life, my very own hobbie.

Raindrops is here

Falling on the street

Like a teardrops

Falling on my face.

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  • bobie on Jun 2, 2011

    like this line…maybe i can add it up, its abca?

    Are you sad while writing this?

  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 2, 2011

    Great writing

  • angie17 on Jun 2, 2011

    bobie oo eh. sad ako nung sinulat ko yan.:( wala akong msulat eh.hehe

  • plumaatpapel on Jun 3, 2011

    short but good

  • papaleng on Jun 3, 2011

    medyo magulo ang thoughts, nevertheless, it is full of emotion. BTW are you a 17 year-old lass.

  • Kaos13 on Jun 5, 2011

    Great!

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