Brilliantly done. the 5,7,5 rhythm of the Haiku poem matched with the imagery of the 7 major colour spectrum of the rainbow. I doff my cap to your clever use of this form – in true multi-meaning of Japanese style. Exceptional!
Lovely…One can read your Haiku and see the rainbow in mind’s eye. As for the technicalities, I’ll leave them to experts but I think you score there too:)
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