Raindrop

Aardaerimus on Nov 16, 2008

Tags: Aardaerimus, conquerer, destruction, drizzle, environment, erosion, falling rain, Haiku, poem, Poetry, Rain, rain drop, raindrop, raining, senryu, water, water drop

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A haiku about the destructive might of the rain.

mighty conqueror
devouring earth and stone
the tiny raindrop

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Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 16, 2008
Your imagery is amazing to describe your concept. I adore this work! A perfect haiku
Fegger on Jan 11, 2009
Flawless! Then again, like Garden Harp, I’m left longing for more phrases! Ooops, yeah–haiku–stringent rules..lol.

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