Drench its magic on my soul.

Raindrops

Wake me up

Cleanse me of this illusion

Falling down

All around

Raindrops

Tears running down my face

Just all around me

Cleansing me

Crying out to me

Pour down on me

Drench its magic on my soul

Tears of the earth

Cleanse and make

Everything okay

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  • tonisan60 on Aug 5, 2008

    As rain refrersh and nurse the soil, so do cry with soul and heart, excelent poem, claps for you

  • roberto sardelli on Aug 5, 2008

    Kathy, I loved this one, you worded it precise and it is perfect.

    Well done

    Regards and take care

    Roberto Sardelli

  • IcyCucky on Aug 5, 2008

    Thanks for sharing this one, Kathy!

  • quiet voice on Aug 5, 2008

    …Hi Kathy, the poem makes you
    feel as if the rain is refreshing
    you, as you read. Take care.

  • Moes Ingram on Aug 5, 2008

    Hi Kathy, This is beautiful, it has feeling. Thank you for sharing.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 6, 2008

    We all need a good cry sometimes. It seems to make things look brighter.

  • R.B. Parsley on Aug 6, 2008

    Kathy,
    I loved your poem. Your choice of words were superb! The only bad part about it, I burned supper reading it! LOL!!! And my wife thanks you! She said it was a good way to get me to take her out to dinner. Great poem. Keep up the good work Kathy!!!

    Randy

  • Judy Sheldon on Aug 6, 2008

    Hey! Good job, you got dinner out for a reader. lol. This poem is great, and I love rain. It felt like rain – refreshing.

  • nobert bermosa on Aug 6, 2008

    hi Kathy,another interesting poem,nicely done,thanks

  • PR Mace on Aug 7, 2008

    Kathy, I loved this one. I love to watch and listen to a good rainstorm. I enjoy your work very much.

  • KathySpring on Aug 7, 2008

    Thanks You all for your feedback. Dinner out for a reader, now thats a true compliment. Thank You all
    Kathy

  • tracy sardelli on Aug 9, 2008

    Lovely poem, thank you for sharing.

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