Raindrops Falling Down

Darla Cooke on Sep 16, 2009

Tags: earth, Haiku, Mud Puddles, raindrops

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Haiku.

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Raindrops falling down

Onto the green earth below

leaving mud puddles

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Comments (19)

giftarist on Sep 16, 2009
Nice one!
Nikita K on Sep 16, 2009
A brilliant haiku…nicely describing the rain!
Ramalingam on Sep 16, 2009
Sharp and to the point.
ken bultman on Sep 16, 2009
Great for splashing in and tracking up the house.
mystery61 on Sep 16, 2009
Good one, my kids loved mud puddles!
Goodselfme on Sep 16, 2009
Great haiku
Mr Ghaz on Sep 16, 2009
Excellent!! Well done! ..This was wonderful and lovely poem as always. nice words too..I loved it. Thanks for sharing this cool stuff..Cheers
cutedrishti8 on Sep 16, 2009
Great one…
rizzei on Sep 16, 2009
nice..simpy cute..rainy seasons..here..yeah:)
rizzei on Sep 16, 2009
nice..simply cute..rainy seasons..here..yeah:)
lillyrose on Sep 16, 2009
lovely just like the rain x
Kate Smedley on Sep 16, 2009
Lovely haiku!
julianhw on Sep 16, 2009
Like it, Darla, makes me think of childhood : )
Tanya Wallace on Sep 16, 2009
Beautifully put Darla! Wonderful poem!
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Sep 16, 2009
I love it. I see raindrops as beautiful tears, cleansing the air, falling to the ground, forming those mud puddles you mention
Ruby Hawk on Sep 16, 2009
wayda go Darla,
emmahaynes on Sep 17, 2009
great:D
Jacques Berkeley on Sep 19, 2009
That’s wild!
CutestPrincess on Oct 4, 2009
beautiful haiku again!

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