Rain tells us so many things, it reminds us of our sorrow as well as joy, success as much as failures we have in life, remind us also of those people who stay for life and those who chooses to leave.

Raining so hard

You offered me cup of coffee

And a naughty smile.

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  • Vinaya says good bye on Dec 22, 2011

    I can so much relate your words.

  • Thell Stars on Dec 22, 2011

    Great haiku

  • AmosTheCat on Dec 22, 2011

    One can’t help but smile at the ending. Really nice. I really enjoy your work. Thanks.

  • KittyK on Dec 22, 2011

    Great haiku and it is now raining in my part of the world…

  • ittech on Dec 22, 2011

    thanks great haiku

  • Profit Buzz on Dec 23, 2011

    The two ladies, they took off their shoes.

  • aheed411 on Dec 23, 2011

    Rainy

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 23, 2011

    and then at night don’t know how that happened.

  • AliAhmad on Dec 24, 2011

    beautiful article…

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