Love in the rain.

Drops of rain on my skin
Soak me to the bone
Glistening like jeweled sin
Like shimmering glass stones
Wet diamonds embrace me
A cool, liquid caress
Chilling me like the sea
As warm lips gently press
Brushing ever so softly
Filling me with fervor
Strong arms hold me ardently
My rainy day savior
Surrounding me completely
Scattering the cold
I shiver implicitly
As true love unfolds

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  • Jenny Heart on Sep 20, 2009

    Love it! Well written!

  • hannemarie on Sep 20, 2009

    Wonderful words, wonderful poem, thank you

  • papaleng on Sep 20, 2009

    sweet and lovely, I can see the picture of you and your love one.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 20, 2009

    Beautiful imagery and a wonderful poem.

  • Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 20, 2009

    nice poem!

  • Sourav on Sep 20, 2009

    Really nice poem!

  • Lostash on Sep 20, 2009

    Another very lovely piece, Lady! You always deliver the goods!

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 20, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, what a lovely poem, I remember many walks in the rain….

  • Jane Jane on Sep 21, 2009

    now that’s romantic. =) nice poem and love your words.

  • giftarist on Sep 21, 2009

    I like this…

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Sep 26, 2009

    Very well written poem, Lady Sunshine.

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