Rainy Night

Sourav on Oct 6, 2009

Tags: dark night, Hope, hopeless, Life, poem, Poem about life, Poetry, Rain, Rainy night, sleepless, Sourav RC

Poetry by Sourav RC.

Desolate dark night
Continual fall of rain
I’m standing alone
With my tears mingled pain;

Distant star is watching me
Witnessing my life of desertion
Sleepless night continues to cry
I’m dwelling in absolute dejection;

Blank eyes stare indifferently
Trying to interpret life’s scrawl,
Strange vacuum in my heart
A doomed life is ready to fall;

Dark - blind rainy night
Every hope has died
All alone in a crowded world
Wishing for a place to hide.

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Gudu on Oct 6, 2009
I like your poem. And i thought it is all about me thanx,.
ashan1614 on Oct 6, 2009
This is beautiful, Sourav, but so sad. I can imagine someone standing in the rain to hide the fact that they are crying…..
livemike on Oct 6, 2009
A great poem with raw emotion…
Frances Lawrence on Oct 6, 2009
You created a real sense of desolation, a very sad poem.
martie on Oct 6, 2009
powerful and moving.
Darla Cooke on Oct 6, 2009
Lovely poem.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 6, 2009
Such a sad piece. The rain can often make feelings worse.
Lovely work.

Christine
lillyrose on Oct 6, 2009
very moving poem, you captured the feelings it provoked perfectly.
cebuanaeyez on Oct 6, 2009
Deep words!
Guy Hogan on Oct 6, 2009
Dark words to describe a dark world, a world without hope.
Mary Patricia Bird on Oct 6, 2009
Great description of emotions.
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 7, 2009
With those who just think
That you are thinking about them
And you together
I cannot understand
Why in this rainy weather
Both of you
Cannot get together

Lovely poem
It takes my heart beat away,
I do not know
For whom your heart beats
I wish it was for her
Who loved you once?
And still does.
May the commenter above
Find in you, her love.
Judi Eddy on Oct 8, 2009
Lovely words. I enjoyed this poem. from here in England, Maybe you could read some of mine. We must have similar thoughts of life.
PR Mace on Oct 9, 2009
Well written and filled with emotion.
Cynthia Bartlett on Oct 10, 2009
I feel your pain, been there done that. hugs
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Oct 10, 2009
Great moving poem. I like how you describe a vaccum in your heart. excellent imagery. Love can be painful.
Moses Ingram on Oct 11, 2009
Sad, but so often true of many people.

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