Everything I was thinking whilst writing.

Just sitting here,unknowingly thinking about all the things that make me happy.

I know who I am but sometimes that seems not enough ?

I see judgement and suddenly it has no affect.

Am I changing or just beginning to see clearly ?

I understand what it is to love a friend dearly,but not how to say what maybe I should.

The difference between needing someone and wanting someone.

Having the will and morality to make the right choices.

Endless tasks to be completed.

Can I do it ?

Can I beat it ?

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  • Darla Smith on Nov 21, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 22, 2009

    You write very well. Yes, I think you will be able to do it. This poem
    is very nicely composed for a person who apparently is quit young. I
    think you may have a real talent. I’ll be looking for more of your
    work.

  • livemike on Nov 23, 2009

    Glad to see you writing again..This is one of your many talents..

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 24, 2009

    Of couurse you can beat it. You just need to stick at it. Lovely work.

    Christine

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