These are a few random poems I made about my take on life. See them as you will. Please comment if there is any way I can make them better.

Darkness

In the darkness
I seek escape.
This darkness of life,
This confusion of nothing,
I can not break free
Of the chains that bind me.
Not knowing where anything is,
Unable to see the key,
I ponder in this darkness
Whether if I’ll ever be free.

Light

This light that shines.
It reveals everything.
Every lie, every false truth,
Nothing can hide from it.
All things fear its power.
Nothing can escape it.
All things are striken with fear.
All things are shown as themselves.
How sad that reality,
Can not be as truthful, as this
World in my mind.

Death

None can escape it.
All are disgusted by it.
They know it is inevitable,
Yet they continue to fight it.
Death.
It comes as sudden as life.
It surround you in it’s robe.
You are already gone if it has you.
There is nothing you can do to escape.
Death,
It makes men tremble.
It makes children scream.
It makes women cry.
It means nothing to the elderly,
For they know that death is upon them

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Comments (9)
  • Kat on May 17, 2008

    very nice Tim, keep up the great work! very sad, very dark, very true to life, especially death. *hugs*

  • Irene on May 17, 2008

    It’s nice. Both true and dark. I like it

  • yammy on May 20, 2008

    its good =]
    very detailed?
    keep it up
    i like “darkness” the most

  • hoan on May 20, 2008

    it good but it well, not my favorite though. u know wat i hate right??
    sad and all
    :( (
    make some happy goin-marry poem
    :D

  • sarena on May 20, 2008

    uh, will, i liked it, but i kinda disagreed with the death part, not all ppl fear death

    and some grammar errors on death too
    lol, like \\\’it surroundS u in its robe\\\’
    lol, yea, other than that, i loved it :]
    hug!

  • NatNat on May 20, 2008

    OH CRAP
    I didn’t notice that omfg
    DAMN IT ><
    I hate the school’s word no spell check ;-;
    Sigh… failure epic failure :<
    You have a grammar error in your comment…
    “will” is “well” :) ;-;

  • chris on May 20, 2008

    Impressive.

  • Casusby on May 20, 2008

    Nicely done….

    Like I know anything meaningful to say.

  • princess anime on Jun 7, 2008

    O.M.G it’s so beatiful T-T i love it

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