A tip for aspiriring rappers.

Well, for a lot of you aspiring rappers out there, I’ve got a great tip: Keep your raps clean, it seems good and makes you not so much desperate for rhymes. Whether participating in a rap battle, or posting your rap on the web, a clean rap is likely to be more popular against rap filled with cuccing. Here is an excerpt from my 4th place rap in the senior rap battle competition:

Why ask why, instead ask why not,
Why use a holster if you’re not a good shot,
Think you can beat me, is that what you thought?
Why pull the trigger, is that all you got?

Why use a lighter if you don’t even smoke,
If you’re really stressed, have a diet coke, (pussy!)
If you are a man, go and throw a punch,
Go on, little faggot, have your captain crunch, (Ohhh)

Think you are a badass, rich, rich pimp?
Pimps aren’t hairy like an ugly little chimp,
Think you’re really ghetto, stupid little whore?
Ghettos don’t learn Spanish from Dora the explorer,

If you wanna learn, learn from the best,
I’m way stronger than a bulletproof vest,
You aren’t worth it, not to even shank,
Here’s three dollars go, buy yourself a skank.

I hoped you learned not to mess with me here,
Twas a rap battle and you rapped like a queer,
By the way, did you take that whore to prom?
Did you like her; after all she was your mom

The most offensive word was pussy and whore, and non cussing raps made the top8 in the competition

also since this must be educational: did you know rap stands for rhythem and poetry?

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