A short poem about my little guilty pleasure…;)

Raspberry Rum

Mary Angela Guillen

Here I am sipppin’ it,

Ever so slowly having it null my senses.

Doctors and loved ones don’t look highly on it,

But my baseball game wouldn’t be the same without distorted lenses.

Candy is dandy as liquor is quicker,

Why does it have to kill my liver?

Addiction isn’t on my mind right now…

Could give up but don’t know how.

I love the little shot glass next to me,

Right now it is my friend.

Same as a flower to a bumble bee,

Sipping its nectar to the end.

I don’t drink often,

But when I do I drink heavy.

I don’t think it will soften,

Me considering a bottle of rum my baby.

Hot and warm does it slip down my throat,

Numbing my brain till it feels like it’s afloat.

I’m much more relaxed as it takes over my system,

No wonder it’s so prone to addiction.

I’ll take a little more…

It won’t hurt.

One thing I know for sure,

Tomorrow it will hurt.

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  • Bo Russo on Nov 8, 2009

    Welcome Lovely Wolf, I loved your poem.I’ll try to get to more tomorrow.

  • Aardaerimus on Nov 8, 2009

    Mmmm Rum.

    I share your sentiments. :-)

  • Teves on Nov 11, 2009

    A very nice poem…

  • XXElleXX on Nov 12, 2009

    Hehehehe..well I love Frigate rum LovelyWolf..haven’t tried Raspberry rum though..a nice ditty by the way :-)

  • Aiyanna on Nov 12, 2009

    Nice one !!!! :)

  • J J Neuman on Nov 13, 2009

    Never had it but I’ve got to find it and try some! Another drink in my cabinet making a comeback is Blackberry Brandy….and I recognize the symptoms your describing above.

  • lucia anna on Nov 17, 2009

    Wonderful poem

  • Night Story on Nov 29, 2009

    Well Done. Cheers! :)

  • standingproud on Mar 21, 2010

    how quaint and delightful
    Cheers :)

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