Rat Race (Haiku)

Gerard Galvestini on Oct 10, 2011

Tags: creative writing, Haiku, Life, poem, Poetry, Rat race, stress

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It sucks to be stuck in one, don’t you think?

Nothing brings more stress

Than being stuck in a rat race,

There’s just no escape!

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Comments (8)

KittyK on Oct 10, 2011
Life can sometimes seem like a rat race…
wonder on Oct 10, 2011
Really, a restless feel. There is so much beyond this narrow world.
Redfiery on Oct 10, 2011
This is a cut throat world. Good Haiku.
Eunice Tan on Oct 10, 2011
Well said
pruelpo on Oct 10, 2011
I like it. You are good in writing haiku.
Gerard Galvestini on Oct 10, 2011
Thank you…
Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 10, 2011
Food for thought!
prospectboy on Oct 22, 2011
Yes it does suck to be stuck in one, and like a few others mentioned before me, life can sometimes be a rat race. Great work.

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