Some persons are like rattlesnakes without a silencer. They lay low waiting for us to strike when we least expect. People should be on guard by watching our neighbor’s back.

Why do some people

Have to crawl in bushes

To lay wait their prey

So as to strike, maim

Rob and kill?

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You’ll never suspect

They are there

As you walk

In the dark to your car

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These individuals

Wait for the innocent

Young and strong alike

Among us

To commit horrible acts

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Are these persons so convoluted

That they don’t care

About the sanctity of life?

Or, are they just callous

Hardened by a bad hand

That life has dealt them?

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We might never know

But their acts 

Are reprehensible

They are like rattlesnakes

With a silencer

And have to be stopped

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Many strike

When they feel

No one is watching

And quickly dash 

Form the scene

Of these atrocious acts

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People ought

To take precaution

Band together

And be on the look out

For these common criminals

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Image by dhReno via Flickr

Your actions

Might very well

Prevent more vicious acts

From happening

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  • straw1979 on Jan 4, 2012

    great work

  • lapasan on Jan 4, 2012

    Some people are vicious, they have no qualms killing and hurting other innocent people. We should be careful of some of our “friends” too because there are people whom we trust who will stab us in the back because of envy or they don’t want us to be above them.

  • girishpuri on Jan 4, 2012

    very nice

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 4, 2012

    I like this

  • prsol46 on Jan 4, 2012

    Excellent work, excellent point!

  • aheed411 on Jan 4, 2012

    Wow

  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 5, 2012

    Great as ever.

  • yes me on Jan 6, 2012

    Great share this cheers

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