Raven

Shirley Shuler on Jan 2, 2010

Tags: black plumage, conquer, Devouring, eagerly, Hiding, prey, raven, stalking, unsuspecting

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Lurking in the dark…

Black plumage

Lustrous

Hiding in the dark

Stalking

Deliberately waiting

Ready to conquer

Eagerly devouring

It’s unsuspecting prey

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Comments (8)

magicdarts on Jan 2, 2010
very bold and menacingly atmospheric!
ken bultman on Jan 2, 2010
Nevermore.
Lady Sunshine on Jan 2, 2010
A dark and foreboding piece, Shirley! I can envision the raven now, stalking its prey.

And a wonderful New Year to you! Lets hope 2010 kicks butt! lol. Stay blessed my friend.
albert1jemi on Jan 2, 2010
great poem
Ruby Hawk on Jan 2, 2010
dark and moody, well done.
fashion girl on Jan 7, 2010
I can relate to this, very simple and sincere poem…
Jane Jane on Jan 7, 2010
powerful piece for me.
thuanynguyen on Jan 7, 2010
Powerful indeed, great write!

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