This came from one of my weird fantasies. I was thinking of a goddess with a split personality. What a disturbing thought.

She is the keeper of winter,

And the mistress of rain.

One woman with two faces,

But one without a name.

Some call her Rayne

As she pours down from the sky,

But Snow turns to slush

Where in her sad heart lies.

Two sides of the same coin

Dueling for control.

Rayne gains the upper hand

Crushing her Snow.

Sad and lonely, she cries out.

Her Snow bound to return.

Two hearts with the same soul.

In this their passion burns.

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  • clay hurtubise on May 1, 2009

    Fun, uplifting piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Chris Stonecipher on May 2, 2009

    I enjoyed reading your poem. It was fun and had excellent rythmn.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings to you,
    Chris

  • OhSugar on May 3, 2009

    Love the flow of the poem. Two hearts iwth the same soul, sounds like love.

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    Good job, touching

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    Well done, Allison.

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