Hurdles on the way
hurdles so high
a yearning to be a true friend.

I heard your music

You called me with your music                                            
From afar I came                                                
could not resist your music                                           
music of love and trust                                               
music of care                                                 
a yearning to be a true friend

Hurdles on the way                                             
hurdles so high                                             
but I danced through them

You welcomed me with warmth                                     
you offered me drink                                         
and the world turned blue                                      
the colour of peace

Our friendship is like wine                                      
the longer we are together                                     
the sweeter we get

Your friendship is like a fountain                                     
your love and care never dries                                     
refreshing to those present
Your friendship is like the Sun,                                              
with all its power                                             
it brought energy to me           

You truly are a friend                                             
a good friend you are                                              
I am glad we met                                                
satisfied we became friends

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  • Yalonda on Jul 22, 2010

    This was a unique idea replying to my poem! Although our poems talk about two different things, it’s very interesting!

  • d1dezire on Mar 4, 2011

    interesting

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