Reality of Love

Jane Jane on Sep 11, 2009

Tags: break-up, Life, love, move on, reality

This is the reality of love on my own opinion.=)

Nobody wanted to be alone

Assurance to be loved is unknown

Some may give a perfect love story

Yet he’s not the one you marry.

He’s just a chapter of your book

There’s a lot more just take a look

We just needed to be broken hearted

To learn to treasure being connected.

And somehow we feel relieved

After all the times we’ve grieved

Still, the pain isn’t missing

A part of us seems dying.

The mutual feeling’s gone

Reminiscing us is banned

How can I move on and start anew

If all I’m thinking is you?

To completely fall out of love

A new friend is a must to have

Since we needed a point of attention

To be able to build new relation.

Befriending first is a nice option

Spend time and share each other’s notion

Being lovers isn’t necessary

What matters is enjoying the company.

The first break up may seem a torture

But definitely made you more matured

You’re not anymore that weak lady

Who can’t live without that somebody.

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raman13 on Sep 11, 2009
Impressive

Keep the good work on

Best Regards
wonder on Sep 11, 2009
Very true.
Darla Cooke on Sep 11, 2009
Interesting poem.
KitKat93 on Sep 11, 2009
interesting poem I liked it, so true are the feelings on love
Dena McCusker on Sep 11, 2009
great piece, and so real. nice work
ashan1614 on Sep 11, 2009
Love can take us through a whole range of other emotions. And I think those last few lines are great advice to all women who think they need a man to complete them or make them happy. Unless you are happy with yourself, and a complete person youself, no one will fill the void.

Good write!
syedaqa on Sep 11, 2009
Perfect i liked it too much thanks for sharing
Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 11, 2009
very nice thoughts, expressed beautifully!
willie wondka on Sep 11, 2009
very good,sandie x.
cardy on Sep 11, 2009
Really good work liked it.
XXElleXX on Sep 11, 2009
Jane—>I’m not sure what the theme of your poem is – smart love, real love or tough love – either way, they’re all wholehearted and satisfying. Good poem.
PPDDFF on Sep 11, 2009
Hello Jane!

Like the song say: Somebooody toooo, someeboody to loveee! Hehe!

Best regards!

PPDDFF
LoveDoctor on Sep 11, 2009
Very nice. Yeah, there are a lot of women especially younger girls who think that if they don’t have a man their world will fall apart. They have a lot to learn about love right. can you pls explain to me why you think that being broken hearted helps you to feel more connected? thanks.
ken bultman on Sep 11, 2009
You’ve expressed a poetic positive attitude toward romance.
iearnonline on Sep 11, 2009
very nice poem
Beth Suess on Sep 11, 2009
Great piece, good witten!
cebuanaeyez on Sep 11, 2009
Well said!
Payge on Sep 11, 2009
A very nicely written expressed piece. Been there,did that and don’t want to do it again.But Im a much stronger lady for going through it then I was before and am glad.I stand alone and don’t need a man to be complete.
Buma on Sep 11, 2009
Lovely, you’ve got loads of comments as well!
ceegirl on Sep 11, 2009
interesting poem
Shirley Shuler on Sep 11, 2009
Nice poem, I liked it!
livemike on Sep 11, 2009
Very good piece of poetry with alot of wisdom…
Sarah Sullins on Sep 11, 2009
ugh- the first breakup. I remember that totally sucked. You are right tho, you need a friend to help you get through and start to “live” again. nice poem.
Tanya Wallace on Sep 11, 2009
Wonderfully expressed poem, very heartfelt!I think this is my fav by you up to press,beautiful meaning!
chantell on Sep 11, 2009
I really like this… Great stuff. Standing Ovation
chantell on Sep 11, 2009
I really like this.
Great stuff. Standing Ovation
Hugo La Rosa on Sep 11, 2009
Very mature writing! Great poem!
DulceCorazon on Sep 11, 2009
great poem, very true. when it’s over and the pain subsides, give thanks for the memories.
Yvonne K on Sep 11, 2009
well done
Carakhorn on Sep 11, 2009
I love this poem is has so many meaning just like what im going through now. Keep up the good work can’t wait to read your next one.
Dee Gold on Sep 11, 2009
ipagpatuloy!
papaleng on Sep 11, 2009
nice way of expressing your thoughts. Yes I do agree, love has a million meanings, each individual can have his own.
Eunice Tan on Sep 11, 2009
Nicely told
unown971 on Sep 12, 2009
Great poems!
Avaxier on Sep 12, 2009
Nice love poem! I Love it.
Diziette on Sep 13, 2009
sometimes we have srenth we never knew about.
CA Johnson on Sep 14, 2009
What a beautiful poem! It is really empowering for people who are going through a breakup.
T.Rex McGoogle on Sep 15, 2009
I like it and it’s therapeutic! I’ll be back for more.
jovelledeguzman on Sep 17, 2009
I like it.. Real, you’re right..
La aprendiz on Sep 17, 2009
It’s so cute. It’s full of sensitivity, continue writing ^_^
galindo on Sep 25, 2009
awe……i like it alot
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 27, 2009
Your creative writing implies that we become more sympathetic after we have experienced some trama and pain. It reminds me of this Republican fellow who had spent his life defending the policies which aided only a few, but terminally ill, his pain made him feel as if he perhaps had done some great wrong which he regreted.

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