I am writing a poem on true and selfish friends.

True friends are rear,

Selfish friends are everywhere.

True friends like you,

Selfish friends spike you.

True friends always with you,

Selfish friends are always trying to use you.

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  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 18, 2010

    An easy rule to distinguish the difference.

  • ken bultman on Jan 18, 2010

    A true friend knows everything about you and still loves you anyway.

  • giftarist on Jan 18, 2010

    Nicely done piece!

  • albert1jemi on Jan 18, 2010

    thats absolutely true

  • lillyrose on Jan 18, 2010

    so true. But I think you mean rare not rear.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 18, 2010

    Very true!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 18, 2010

    It is sad but true. True friends are always there for you and are quite hard to come by. Nice work.

    Christine

  • Tim P Stavert on Jan 18, 2010

    This is so true Raman,
    I have had many so called friends on Triond as well as other walks of life. They promise one thing to get a favour in return and expect you to give more than they are prepared to give you in return so that they can profit from you.
    I think you could have been more detailed thus giving the article or subject more substance and more of a talking point.

    Best Wishes

    Tim

  • alc on Jan 18, 2010

    A great and looking forward to reading more!

  • GreenSunshine on Jan 18, 2010

    Ha, the show “friends”. I haven’t seen that show in a while. Great read btw.

  • Sourav on Jan 18, 2010

    Nice and true.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 19, 2010

    Selfish friends love you because of, true friends love you in spike of.

  • drelayaraja on Jan 19, 2010

    Great one on friends :)

  • AlmaG on Jan 19, 2010

    What you wrote is very true! Great post.

  • MCA on Jan 19, 2010

    very nice explanation. i am fully agree

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 19, 2010

    Right, true friends are there when you need them.

  • athena goodlight on Jan 19, 2010

    Interesting poem.

  • wonder on Jan 21, 2010

    Provided they get something from you, they are friends. Better not to have one.

  • AussieSheila on Jan 23, 2010

    Very interesting poem. Though you have a typo there – it’s rare, not rear :)

  • ammus89 on Jan 27, 2010

    touching …great job

  • pedrodantas on Jan 28, 2010

    I love this text!

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