Just a basic poem on broken relationships, nothing really to say about it except that I hope you like it its short but still I think its good but I want to know what you think.

Scraped knees

broken hearts

girl in tears

torn apart

forgotten promises

empty meanings

lost love

black cloud screenings

left alone

cry to sleep

you’re the reason

why she weeps

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  • Teresa on Jun 21, 2009

    Very Good! Simple but to the point.

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